This is done in Pony creator, so this isn't artwork, let along artwork that's worth giving a critique to, but whatever.
Vision is only 2 stars because it's at least someone creative. However, the rest do not even get a star because this is done in pony creator, instead of actually being drawn. Editing a pony creator pony is not equal to you actually drawing the whole thing.
Originality: 0.5 for using Pony Creator
Technique: 0.5 because it's not actual artwork, it's pony creator. You can't have a 'technique' if you use a character creator.
Impact: 0.5 because ponies made on the Pony Creator just look 'off'.
Why are you uploading pony creator creations to DA? It's not *that* hard to learn how to draw.
Firstly, I did use the pony creator but not for everything, I use it for the eyes 'cos I can never get them to look right and I also use it for hair on occasion (mainly the tails) and sometimes to get the pose right. But otherwise I do it myself.
I tried my best ok, and if you don't like my work then why bother even writing a critique.
Lol, critique's aren't supposed to be used just to compliment you. Learn how to draw, then require critiques.
Critques are there for people to tell you how to get better, to get better, you should not use pony creator at all. Instead, just work on drawing the charactrs from scratch.
Critiques aren't supposed to be good, necessarily. They're there to help you.
Thats true, and whilst you have a point, you could of been slightly nicer, 'cos to me, you didn't exactly sound like you were trying to help.
I do normally draw things by myself but for smaller things like this I use the pony creator to help so that it doesn't take as long.
And yes, I know that they are, but you could of said something nice instead of being so negative..
It's a bit frustrating as an artist seeing people upload Pony Creator creations to Deviantart, so sorry if I was a bit rude, but I stand by what I said.
I see what you mean, but at least I didn't just take the image and upload it as it is, I edited it and added other characters which allot of peopler do. And thats ok, I knw you where only trying to get your point across /)